playful,naive,lively she was,
until life snatched away her innocence..
For the prompt ‘playful’ on : The Daily Post
Lost
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Sunshine 
जुदा है शाख़ से गुल, रुत से आशियाने से,
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कली का जुर्म घड़ी भर का मुस्कुराना था,,!!
#शहज़ाद
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So remorse.. Awesome
👌👌👌
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😊🙏
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That’s absolutely said..
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Indeed😒😒
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You are welcome
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😊👍
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Theres him in this story, theres a her and there’s a story of broken dreams. Painful and heart wrenching to hear/see such things happen.
A thousand stories in a few words. You seem to have mastered the art of cognitive imagination where a simple, single word puts you in a trajectory of emotions.
Im thinking a lot about a lot of people and a lot of incidents.
Heartbreaking !
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It is Indeed!! And you know I couldn’t write more to it, I felt remorse, petrified as if I was the one experiencing all those.. It’s very sad that these things happen..
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Yes. When you write, you are the muse for the art. So it takes nerves to write such stuff. You’ve done a very brave job here. Respect to you, woman 😉
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That’s a lot for this little piece, I seriously don’t deserve this..
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You do. 🙂 It speaks a lot
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Well, I just try ,that’s it..
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Nice post…..
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😊😊😊😊😊
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😉
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yes. life does that to innocence. and it is heartbreaking.
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Truly😒😒😞
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A harsh but sad truth… well presented!
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Thank-you so much😊😊😊😊
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And life does not do any thing to the him’s in the world around? just being inquisitive
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I never heard of any one instance of ”him”
Did you??
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Yes, that’s the reason I asked
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Ohh, I never did 😦
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Dhwani…you conveyed a lot in simple two lines.. thumbs up..
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I couldn’t say more on this topic 😦
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Few words deep message. 👌
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Tried to write more but words failed, emotions conquered 😦
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Its wonderful even then.
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Thank-you Aishwarya 😊😊😊
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Nice one friend!! 😉
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Nice one!! lost innocence is like a broken crystal vase… even if mended, the original finish may never be there. And, there is nothing as sad as lost innocence
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Actually!!
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hmmm – trying a new language(anticipatory bail)
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Which language??
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hivyo kusikitisha, bibie!
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Swahili 🙂 🙂
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yes..you got it right….
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How many languages are you going to learn ha??
I guess I have to bookmark Google Translator hehehe
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haha..i have already bookmarked it!!
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I am on it, trust me 🙂
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haha
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Feeling sad!
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poignant! But sad. second post this week on the lost innocence. The other one was at heartbeats4ublog@broken bangles
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Yup, it was remorse as well 😦
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