After a huge war with words & emotions,
the uncanny silence,
the warmth,
the embrace,
the little red thing’s beat,
were enough to soothe the raging mind..
Sometimes, Silence does more than words!!
rays on life…
After a huge war with words & emotions,
the uncanny silence,
the warmth,
the embrace,
the little red thing’s beat,
were enough to soothe the raging mind..
Sometimes, Silence does more than words!!
And to sink in the river of love until I slay “
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“Sometimes, Silence does more than words!! ”
This verse yours made me to pen down few more lines,
“Where our eyes says a thousand phrase,
And the our smiles steals the rage away,
To freeze the moment is what I pray,
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That’s so superawesome, loved it 🙂 🙂
Awesome Mahalakshmi 🙂
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ssunshine14, I was wondering if I could possibly interest you in a project to many here at WordPress (other writers) and to me personally. I am mean really, who doesn’t want Peace in this choatic world?
We have 140 contributions to date, and I am trying again to rope in
as many contributors to the Poets for Peace challenge
(in place until this the end of August). The many voices in response
to this have been fantastic, and I’d love you to add yours (again,
if applicable) if you can. Feel free to use an existing piece of
writing or a new one asking for peace and/or about the troubled
times in which we live.
If you are interested, please leave your poem in the comments
section of Neha’s blog and it will be added.
https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/2016/07/16/calling-all-poetscreative-minds-to-a-grand-collaboration-poets-for-peace/comment-page-5/#comment-19287
Thank you –
Your voice matters.
‘We are so grateful to be part of this community where poets and
creative minds from around the world stand together uniting for PEACE!
This collaboration is open till August 31st and we hope to see more of
you join in!’
– Neha
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That’s a great initiative and I’d be happy to contribute as well 🙂 🙂
I have some posts on it, I’ll drop in Neha’s blog and thanks for considering me 🙂 🙂
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Thank You for your contribution. Truly, you have a very persuasive way with words. 😉
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Aww that’s such a great compliment thank you so much😊😊😊
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Wonderful.
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🙂 🙂
Thank-you so much , I am glad you liked it 🙂
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Is it really what I think it is or is it my crude mind 🙈
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What does your crude mind say then
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Crude things are better unsaid.
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ahem ahem dal me kuch kaala hai heheh
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Sahi pakde hain 🙈
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Heeeyyyyyyy MAaaaa Maattaaajjiiiiiiii
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Kem shu thayu? 🤔
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🤗🤓kai nai😆😆😆
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To kem Mataji ne yaad karya? 😝😝😝
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Emaj🤓🤓🤓
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Hahahaha khara chho aap pan 😝😝😝
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hhahaha haajj to 🙂 🙂 🙂
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:))
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Ladte raho haste raho !!😊😊😀
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Hahahah kya blessing di hai wahhh
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nice one, echo… the unassuming power of silence! shhhhhhhhh…(I am silent, for, any comments would dilute the tranquility)
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Hahahah that was so highly of you 😁😁😁
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hahaha😁😁😁
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Sachi 😒
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😁😁😁
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Arey sacchhii 🤔🤔🤔
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thank you ma’am!!!!
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😃😃😃😃
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May have typo errors since send button pressed before editing. Hope you will give opportunity to use common sense , where words are not aligned and making no sense, hope your common sense will cover up all my mistakes.
Hehehe let me talk in silence for rest of my emotions , so signing off.
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Hahaha no worries I will try to understand
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When the silence is there, the ‘I’ is not there and thus only you me as a whole are there….. In silence this me knows it is nothing but a part of you…. In silence this me learn there something greater then the ‘I’….. In silence there is peace, love, compassion because silence is the true nature of this me formed from’ I’.
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Wow, beautifully drafted Pawan 🙂🙂🙂
Amazing 😌👌🏻👌🏻
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Was it drafted dear sweet lovely Soul, ssunshine….. It simply flows… When this I drafts it depends upon how???? But you know me I like why???…. Hehe
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Hahahaha yeah I know you especially the why
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Hehe 😉…. So how are You and how is day going so far? Have a wonderful blessed amazing day dear. Did you get to read my last post…. Simple living.
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Day so far is all good and even me..
And your post I didn’t read but will surely as per time permits
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Good and even..
.. There is beauty in it…. When one is too extreme in life then our mind plays but in middle only we find way to be here and now… Enjoy the day
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Same to you 🙂🙂🙂
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sweet of you ….
NAMASTE
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Namaste 🙂 🙂
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Silence is language of god,
and food for soul,
No doubt beyond expressions,
Where everything else is just spectator,
to witness the silence . All answer in this world are poor which can be expressed. Only silence is perfect answer to every question. Any answer other than silence is just pushing question to next level. Question remains the same . Only silence is the true definition of God , You and me. Silence is state where you can connect with ultimate.
Where all confusion evaporates silence emerges.
It’s worth visiting silence more often
to know beauty of silence. A walk with self is worth doing activity. Where you have dropped all hopes, desires and you simply enjoy the beauty of present moment. You are completely aligned with nature. No struggle. Just being the sheer existence. No judgement. Just witnessing things around. Your breath , accepting everything the way they are . Witnessing everything in its totality . Finding everything perfect.
Silence gives birth, to the opportunity
To talk with self to be with self. Visiting the self beyond body , beyond thoughts.
It’s only in silence, journey starts from outer world to inner world. The beautiful world within. Only in true silence I can write you can read and feel the emotions behind the expressions. In silence we are focused . We can only see the beauty in detail when we are focus. When we do any thing with focus then it’s me and my doing rest of the world is just distraction for me. My doing is my entire world. The way I am writing this post in utter silence. Me my thoughts and my words are equally enjoying present moment in its entirety is happening in silence.
Silence creates situation for contemplation.
Only in silence we can fall in love with self.Then everything around becomes Beautiful. Our love and loved and self are not different . This 3 elements are one. Then I am not loving my lover . I am feeling him or her with in me. Then loving some one is not act but extension of the same energy. I am never tired loving self and entire creation.
Never find anything imperfect.
Perfection is the only thing I can see with in me and around can happen if we have understood the power of silence.
Creativity seed sprout in silence and can touch the heights. Feeling silence in crowd and chaos is an art to learn. One who is with the self is always in silence. One who is away from center of existence is away from silence.
Many times we shout and just say leave me alone. We are hurt with outside world , healing happens in silence. Best remedy to be with self and identifying others with thier self.
When we are disappointed with world we try to search solution for our problems field is silence. We recollect our self and accumulate courage to face the world again.
Eternal Celebration can happen in silence. Nector of bliss felt in silence. Meditation happens in silence. Sleep is the best example of silence. where we lost in dream land . Deep sleep is perfect example of silence. Where outer and world inside both becomes silence and we experience our true self. We find recharged after facing silence.
Sun is silent ,
Earth is silent ,
So silent is moon.
God is silent
I am silent
You are silent too !
Love is silent
Words are silent
Meaning silent too !
Eyes are silent
Smile is silent
Today emotions are silent too,
Morning silent,
Night is silent
Nature is silent too !☺
Love is silent,
Silence is silent,
Today fight is silent too !😊
Good morning.
So beautiful . Amazing .
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😍😍😍😍
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Omg Silence, seriously I don’t have any words, you wrote it so beautifully so crisp it was, every word carrying a deep emotion which can only be felt, it cannot be talked about and even we cannot write in words to describe the feeling behind, it’s my honour that you described this so beautifully keeping in mind every aspect of human existence, it’s simply super awesome 🙂🙂🙂
Thank-you so much for your wonderful description 😊😊😊😊😊
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Your words of appreciation are greater than what I have wrote.
You are humble and kind in appreciation.
Wishing you all peace and success in life ahead.
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🙂 🙂 🙂
Thank-you so much Nisthur and wish you the same 🙂 🙂
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😊😊
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🙂
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😊😊
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And yes, about the poem it’s so short, sweet and crisp, awesome in all 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
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Thanks you have been my inspiration for today poem and write up.
Thanks for inspiration.
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Awwww I am so glad that I could help you 🙂 🙂
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😊
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ha ha.. did you write it for me…
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Hahaha did you feel so
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no doubt.. he he
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hahahaha
Tell me what’s fishy ???
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Awesome with a nice end
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Thanks as always Kiran 😊😊😊😊😊
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Absolutely true, the last verse!
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Thank-you Vatsal 😊😊😊😊😊
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