she carried stars everywhere she went,
spreading it’s light even in those
dark alleys and dungeons…
For the prompt ‘carry’ on :Haiku-Horizons
Haiku-18
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Sunshine 
She is not doubt Dhwani !😊
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🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Astonishing.
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Is it??
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She is the carrier of stars.
Daughter of Sun too.
Sunshine is thy name.
Profoundly written 😊
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Wow that’s amazing Kiran, thank-you 😌😌😌😌😌
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Great 🙂
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😊😊😊😊
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see i am regular , no 🙂 🙂
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Yeah, you are.. sorry for that 🙂 🙂
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sorry again!! 🙂 🙂
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Lol 😂😂😂😂
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Short yet Beautiful
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🙂 🙂 🙂 Gracias Puneet 🙂
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so nice of her and you too
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hahaha
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“Whenever that sun shines….it mean to provide light to universe…& Whenever this sun shines with a post…she does mean to provide bright light to
Wordpress”…….😉
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That’s the comment of the day I could say, thanks a ton VIN..O..Diesel, I was just writing, didn’t know it would create a difference 🙂 🙂
But, glad it did
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Yes ofcourse…….it did..& keep the good work going…#SUNSHINE….
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Thanks a ton again 😊😊😊
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Good to see you have
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Thanks 🙂 🙂 🙂
Glad you liked it..
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😇
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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He was a bright sun shining
She came he carried brightness of moon
She left and he is darkness
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ohh, a sad end..
let’s make it a happy one..
he was a bright star shining,
over the darkness in her life,
making her live again 🙂 🙂
What’s say now ??
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He wished to be the shining star
Her life he wanted to be bright
She wanted but let him go away
Her ego her mind but played game
He still cries and sees only darkness
Once he was bright now no light
What was his mistake he still ask
She has no heart to answer that
He still keeps sending light to her
Hoping she brightens him with love again
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Aww that’s poem is so full of emotions, great Pawan 🙂 🙂
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Hope You don’t mind if I take your words and my words and compose it and rewrite it on wordpress making it a post
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No worries, go ahead, I’ll be more happy 🙂 🙂
P.S. Do tell me once you write it 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much and yes I will tell you because it all starts from You…. Inspired by you. ☺
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I am glad to be that medium, thanks Pawan 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Oh this is Wonderful–and your header photo is SO GORGEOUS!!!
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Thanks a lot, it was just a little try to relate with the write-up 🙂
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I LOVE the ocean 🙂
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That’s a picture clicked at Andaman Island, I being amateur photographer tried my best to click, I am so very happy that you liked it, thanks a lot 🙂 🙂 🙂
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LOVE it!
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😊😊😊😊
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🙂
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cheers to her…nice one dhwani
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Yo Yo 🙂 🙂 🙂
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“she carried the sun’s brightness
wiping off the dark clouds of negativity
sunshine she is, cheers to her!!”
yo yo yo!!
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Oolala, is that for me *winking*
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hahaha( bowing in courtesy)…
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Is that a yes then???
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of course, senora
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🙂 🙂 🙂
Grinning broadly
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…..(happy to make someone’s day)
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🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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I guess translator is on pause these days 🙂 🙂 (intrigued)
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oh..that way(smirking)!!
had sent the translator on forced leave… shall I reactivate(…devilish thoughts)
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Well, do I mind (rethinking)
No, I don’t (a big hearty laugh)
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sasa uko matatani, bibie (hope like hell the translator hasn’t goofed up)
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je n’ai pas peur (hahahaah)
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oh!! then you see, Madame Echo!
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yeah, we’ll see 🙂 🙂
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hmmmmm
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hahahaha
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alors je vais envoyer des nuages sombres après, madame (dont you worry this is just a threat…)
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sol is the name 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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sol??
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sunshine in spanish heheheh
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you caught me there, dhwani…bu I call you echo!!
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But people here know me by Sunshine
hehehe
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i know, i know ma’am( quickly backtracking..)
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good good hehehe
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hmmmm, echo echo!!(grinning). c u later, that was a nice banter session!
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Yeah, it was 🙂 🙂 🙂
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she was light to all
she was the daughter of the sun
who lived among the stars…
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Wow, lovely 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
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