the sky was decorated that day,
with loads of blue and a tinge of red,
because that was her favorite
and dying person's wishes are never neglected..
rays on life…
the sky was decorated that day,
with loads of blue and a tinge of red,
because that was her favorite
and dying person's wishes are never neglected..
Lovely!
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Hey, after a long time 🙂 🙂
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Reblogged this on Saint's Mind.
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🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
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This is beautiful! I love your choices of words. I just had an idea of a short story, which probably might take a very long while. Haha. Have you considered writing a short story? You should post some works on Wattpad if you haven’t heard from it.
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Thanks for your appreciation 🙂 🙂
And all the best for your story, do ping me I do read wattpad stories, but for me writing, well never thought about it 🙂 🙂 I just write normal, not that mature to post it on a platform so big 🙂
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Mature or not, it doesn’t matter just as long you love writing. A lot of people have their own writing styles. I think many readers on Wattpad will enjoy your poems. I also thought the same thing, but I wanted to experiment different writing styles, literary elements, and genres.
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You got me thinking girl 🙂
Lemme see what can be done 🙂
Will let you know soon 🙂
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Deep.
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Thanks a lot Jojo 🙂 🙂 🙂
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That’s Great Thinking Dhwaniji.
‘ ना-ना करते भी ‘सागर’आख़िर उनको शायर बना दिया.!
जो बातें करते थे दिल ना देने की क़ातिल बना दिया.!! ‘
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wow, great Sagar 🙂 🙂
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Thanks Dhwaniji.
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Welcome ji 🙂
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Pleasure.
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🙂🙂
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Phir Se…Wahi.
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??
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Box wala Cartoon .Dhwaniji.
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Kya box wala??
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Azi Smile Wale Cartoon.
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Meko nai samaj ra🤔🤔
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Wish and our real self never Dies ! Both are series of continuation.
Is it not Dhwani ?😊
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Yeah, only the form is different 🙂
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Hmmmm yes indeed !😊
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🙂
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Superb!
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Thanks Dorna 🙂 🙂 🙂
You always appreciate my efforts, so glad to have you here 🙂
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And to you sunshine14, I greatly admire your courageous spirit in sharing with others your poetry, poems, daily thoughts.
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I am touched, thank-you Dorna 🙂
Have a great day ahead 🙂
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How beautiful and poignant. Thank you.
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Hey thanks to you for reading and leaving your mark here, not to me 🙂 🙂
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Is this post complete
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Yeah, you don’t feel so??
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After never.. ne something..
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neglected 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Hmmm …someone who actually reads you poems.. you should throw me a party 😂
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hehehe
Come down to Ahmedabad 🙂 🙂
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So you are there .. I am actually coming there
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So then actually we can meet and you can have your treat( it rhymed aaahhhhh)
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See the universe conspires😂😂
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Karma 🙂 🙂
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Sad……………………..
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Yeah, sometimes even last wishes aren’t fulfilled..
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She found peace
What if the last wish of a dying person is never to be born with the regret that why she was born in the first place
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Even I wish that, high five
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High five
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yo 🙂
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Nobody should find peace that way.
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So what can be done about it??
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Nothing now. But nothing could have been done. Nobody should finish before the finish line.
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Yeah, true 🙂
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नीला आसमान यूं अपने माथे पर आज रंग सिंधूरी भर गया,
,
,
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कोरे कागज़ सी ज़िन्दगी की आखिरी तमन्ना जैसे पूरी कर गया,, !!
#BuNnY
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Waah, super awesome Bunny ji 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks to you for super awesome inspiration always 😊.. but again starting to use “ji” is not awesome 😝😛
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a gesture baba, nothing else 🙂 🙂
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Hehe okay ji 😛🙈…
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😆😆😆
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🙁🙁🙁
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Kya hui 🙃
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😂 😂 Phunsuk wangdu
Nothing it was a sad post and didn’t know what to write.
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Hehehehehe
Okies, I understand 😊😊😊😊
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Wow
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Thanks for stopping by and giving your valuable feedback, glad you liked it 🙂
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Your blog is really amazing…keep it up
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Wow, that’s a huge compliment, thanks a ton 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
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hmmmm..short, sweet & sad!!
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Is it??
감사 hehehehehe
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hmmm, yes echo
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🙂 🙂 🙂
I guess the language there was totally ignored…
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read again…. it is beautiful, yet sad..visualised “the sky decorated with loads of blue and a tinge of red”
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It is, indeed!! The tinge was stating something if you noticed??
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hahahahaha
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😬😬😬
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mtu anaweza daima unataka..
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What you wish??
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oh…so many wishes! one could write a poem/story on those wishes!!
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Yeah, true 🙂
Wishes are endless 🙂
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yes ma’am
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🙂 🙂
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Short and poignant.
Well written. 🙂
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Whooaa after a long time, how are you??
Thanks for the comment 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Hey.
You remember. 😊
I thought you might have forgotten. 🙈
I am doing fine, thank you.
How are you doing ?
My pleasure. 😊
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I remember everyone who drops in here including you 🙂 🙂
I am super-fine 🙂 🙂
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That’s too generous of you.😊
I have been MIA for so long. So.
And glad to know you are doing great. So how has life been?
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Ohhh, life’s is little of blogging more of thinking what to blog next 😬😬😬😬😬😬😬
How’s life there
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I know right?
Looks like I haven’t been doing much justice to blogging. Just thinking what to blog next but not writing. 🙈
Life’s been good so far. Thank you. 😊
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Yeah, every blogger over here knows 🙂 🙂
Stay blessed, Stay Healthy, wish you don’t go short of posts 🙂 🙂
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Exactly. 🙂
Fingers crossed.
Stay blessed and healthy yourself. And yeah, keep inspiring. 😊
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🙂 🙂
Keep inspiring!!!
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That’s your department, inspiring others. 😉
Mine is to not get lazy and get down to write after being inspired by you. 😀
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Oooo I see, so is the lazy mind on work already???
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Lazy mind is on break right now. 🙊🙈😔
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Again 🤔🤔
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It always has been. 🙈
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Haasshh 😰 all the efforts went in vain 😬😬
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Sorry. 🙈
I will get back. Soon.
May be tomorrow. 😜
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Ohh 😲 I pray to God that your tomorrow doesn’t take so many today’s 😁😁😁😁
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Hehe. Thank you. You are way too kind. 😊
I will pray too. 😜
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haahahah
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😜😜
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