she considered herself lucky as she had everything one ever desired for,
except for her soul which was already sold out to someone,
who was never her’s….
Lucky
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Sunshine 
Quite intense and a bit poignant …I really like how u play in these short writing of urs…keep going 🙂
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I am just trying to portray some grave issues in a simple way for everybody to understand and relate to, I hope I do justice 🙂
Thanks for the motivation to write more 🙂 🙂
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I actually found u to b quite just….it really is a difficult art expressing in fewer words, but then there is u……keep playing 🙂
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And keep reading, I hope I provide you with more good stuff 🙂
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Surely 😀
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🙂🙂🙂
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😀
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happy to read lucky!
xoxo
rashidheniablog.wordpress.com
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Lucky to have you reading 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Nominated you because you deserve it. 🙂
https://theviewfrommywindowlaura.com/2016/08/16/blogger-award-acceptance-and-nominations/
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Aww that’s so nice of you dear, but this is a award free blog.
I am glad that I came in your list, thanks a lot Laura 🙂
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No worries! 🙂 Have a great day!
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Thanks a lot Laura 🙂 🙂
Happy blogging!!
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Mmm… tragic!
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Indeed 🙂
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Don’t know if you know the news, but we are, I am trying to tell others about PoetsForPeace…all contributions are going to be published in Praxis Magazine Online!
Take a moment and read the link here that I am sharing with you. Thank You again for your time and consideration.
https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/2016/08/16/attention-poetsforpeace-contributors-we-are-getting-published-will-need-your-help/
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That’s great to hear, on to it 🙂
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Savvy. Perhaps a beginning to a more extended series?
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Well, I never thought about it 🙂
Do you want me to??
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ssunshine14, If you choose to move forward into a series, that’s certainly your own personal choice. I simply thought and still believe, your writing..could/can also stand alone as one singular creation.
If you believe that you could develop more into a continued series -I would say do so but only if you truly feel passionate and confident that you want to say and or explore the realm of further possibility.
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I would definitely think about it, thanks for motivating, supporting and correcting my mistakes 🙂 🙂
Lucky to have you here 🙂
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still she considered herself lucky ? too positive a woman 😊
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Yeah, lucky!!
Indeed, optimistic woman 🙂
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Tragic but lovely too. Because there is something romantic about losing your soul to someone. Atleast in theory! 😉Nicely written Dhwani 👌💕
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Yes, only in theory I’d say 🙂 🙂
Thanks Avi 🙂
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Soul touching!
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Aww thank-you Meenakshi 🙂
and thank-you for stopping by as well 🙂
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You in real sense are Sunshine 🙂 Its my pleasure I reached here!!
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That’s so generous of you but I am still learning to spread this sunshine all over, do help me 🙂 🙂
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Sure you can consider me as a friend and I will do any thing possible to help you! 🙂
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Yayyyy, happy friendships day girl and welcome to my blog, now there is no retreating back ha
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☺👍
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and I hope to cater you with best of services and in return I want you to inspire others through your blog 🙂 🙂
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For sure👍
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Show me the ray of positivity and optimism
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hahaaha, there are two sides of coin, trust me it’s essential to see this side for moving onto the positive one 🙂
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Hehehehe I need to learn and learn again 😛
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hahah so now do you still need those rays or this would do for now??
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Hehehe rays of positivity needed always.
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arey to idhar me wahi to bata rai thi -_-
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Got it, just another example of expectations
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hahaha
I hope it didn’t hurt hahaha
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Hehehehe no didn’t hurt just hard to digest it coming from you
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Haasshhh 😅 why can’t it
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Habit of seeing the positives and smiling things from you 😊
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Okies, glad to hear that 🙂
kabhi kabhi kuch daag acchhe hai 🙂 🙂
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Hehehe Surf ka kharcha karwa ke hi manoge 😛
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Anything to make you understand 🙂
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Shukriya, karam, maherbaani 😊😊😊
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hahahahahah
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😀😀😀
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🙂
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the devil ?
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didn’t get you??
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there’s a phrase sold the soul to the devil
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Maybe, to her 😊😊
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to her devil. is that what you mean ?
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To her a devil I meant( we have so many connection issues, I guess we should use a good network 😂😂😂😂). Just kidding
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I Still don’t get it
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To her, he was a devil taking away her everything 🙂 🙂
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that’s what I asked first 😂
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that’s what I gave you ( a little late :p)
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Worth the wait ??
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I should ask you that??
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asking myself that
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so what’s the answer then?
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thinking if I should be honest and rude or polite and diplomatic
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I’d prefer the first one
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not worth it 😂
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okies, I’ll bear that in mind the next time 🙂
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you are going to have a bear in your mind ? teddy or polar ? panda may be
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I like panda, so yes I’ll have him :p hahahahaha
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lucky panda .
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:p
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that soul is truly lucky to have that great lesson of life
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Indeed Akhila, lucky 🙂
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Powerful words
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sorry to reply late but your comment was spammed..
thanks again 🙂 🙂
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Oh, don’t worry. My pleasure
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Poor soul.. but….
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……..
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but, cant we buy/get the soul back? so that she is ‘complete’
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That’s what the point was Hari, you got it 🙂
It is the only thing which cannot be bought, that ‘sold’ was just an expression 🙂 🙂
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si senora!! the soul is still there, very much within her, masked deep insides the recesses of her ‘self’… all she has to do is to take a re-look inside
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or find someone to help her in the process 🙂 🙂
you said it right 🙂
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so true… and at the end, she MUST have have her soul intact, happy..
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she has to go through this to learn things which only these experiences can teach??
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hmmm..so true( why am i agreeing whatever echo is telling today??)
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Even I was thinking the same :p
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that’s ‘cose of the title of your post…
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Oooo, I am feeling relieved now heheheh
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hahaha
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I guess that I should continue posting this title on my every post heheh
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Lucky 1, Lucky 2…..ever Lucky and so on..
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Yeah true, what do you think?
Will it help me
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Oh…. you dont need all that! you are as such lucky!!
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does it have any time limit??
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No echo.. time is not a criteria in your case.. special waiver accorded
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valid up to??
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life time offer! the scheme is called “luck unlimited”
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waahhhh hhhahahhaah
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howzzat
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Awesome👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
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dont tease me… or else!
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Ohhh bhai🖐🏻 wait I give up 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻
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haha..see, how easy!!
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smirking
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…(smirk noted & acknowledged)
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grinning
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(smiling – and now laughing)
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hahahaha it’s good for health btw
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You wrote very profound and deep and yet very creative .
Thats beautiful soul with in you, Are you sure she is not yours any more?
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That’s just a gesture in the poem nothing else Nisthur 🙂 🙂
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yeah i understand , but very creative indeed
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hehehe thanks as always Nisthur 🙂 🙂
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you are welcome
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🙂
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That is very deep!!👍
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Thank-you Incredible Pie 🙂 🙂
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I like that!!👍 Someone remembers the soul behind my name ☺
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You are known by that, and I cannot forget to mention it 🙂
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