the mountains were awaiting the celebration, sky was dancing in it's own glory, love was in those white stuffed pillows, thundering it's way out, a beautiful sacred ceremony was about to take place, rain and the forest were about to marry, Vows were taken, Rings were exchanged, A little drop on the ground, made them the happily ever after...
Wow! !!
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Sorry for replying so late, thanks for your valuable feedback, glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
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Written nicely. 🙂
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😊😊😊🙂 thanks 🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Welcome
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😊😊😊
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Such a wondrous ceremony.
But here I think it should be..
Sky was dancing in it’s (its’) glory
Pillows, thundering it’s (its’) way out,
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Ohh, I thought this was perfect, isn’t it??
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sky was dancing in it’s own glory,
in this line, are you saying that the sky is dancing in its own glory, OR are you saying that the sky was dancing in it has/it was glory.
Perhaps this site can help, give a better example, explanation than I can…
http://englishplus.com/grammar/00000227.htm
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The first line was what I meant to say 🙂🙂🙂🙂
Still, thanks for your feedback always, will check that out 🙂
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No worries and please keep in mind that I was only making, possibly suggesting something other than your original thought.
Then I must remember that the work is that of the Writer -so keep everything or nothing, change something or nothing. It is all your expression, not mine. 🙂
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Yeah Dorna, no worries for that, I do appreciate you helping me out and I am glad to have you here as well 🙂
Thank-you 🙂
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Good one! What a beautiful mind of yours.
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That comment made my night 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 thank-you!!!
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Wondrous !
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🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 bas itna hi, kuch shayari expect ki thi 🙂🙂🙂
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Haha mantramugdh ho gya tha padh ke 😇.. en realized that it is unmatchable 👌.. thats why wondorous 😃…
PS : i was busy in bragging about awards i got 😅.. hope you will check my recent post 😆🙈..
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Hahahaha aashcharya Chakit Reh gai me hehehe
P.S. Awards ha😁😁, I am definitely checking✌🏻️
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wow , so i am motivating you to learn complicated hindi words hehe 😛
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Lol, this is the most used typical shudh Hindi word everyone uses when they need to boast off their Hindi skills 😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Is gyanwardhak tathya ko ujagar karne k liye apka bahut aabhar devi 😄🙈😅
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Ohh, ok ok heheheheh
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😀 😀 😀
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The Nature’s wedding. Beautiful poem.. 🙂
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Thanks PH, after a long time 😊😊😊😊
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Welcome.. 🙂
Yeah! It was long.. 🙂
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😊😊😊 Hope you had a good stay here 🙂🙂🙂🙂
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Very much it was.. 🙂
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keep visiting often 🙂 🙂
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mountains, rain, forest..and love, what a lovely cocktail, echo! cheers!!
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And that’s a lovely comment 😊😊😊
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and the pleasure is mine, senora
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😌😌😌
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Beautiful imagery used in the poem
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Hehehehehe thanks for the comment again 🙂🙂🙂
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Wonderful narration!
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Thanks a lot, I am glad you liked it, thanks for visiting 🙂 🙂
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That was nice Sunshine :)))
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Thanks Shahz, after a long time 🙂 🙂
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Oh yeah! Too bad I don’t get to see any of your(my initial followers) posts on my news feed lately. Wonder why ??😲
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Because you have so many new followers 🙂 🙂
Even I used to face such problems so once in a while I would go to everyone’s blog and check out their work 🙂
Life made easy hehehe
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Oh great! Maybe I should do that. Thanks a mil darlz.
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Hehehehehe always welcome 😊
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😍😍😍😍
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Hey! I’ve nominated you for the 3 days 3 quotes challenge. If interested, check this out https://scriptedsheet.wordpress.com/2016/09/29/3-days-3-quotes-challenge/
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Hey hello Riddhi, thanks for the nomination 🙂
I will complete this challenge as and when possible 🙂
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Sure 😊
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😊😊🙂
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Such a beautiful interpretation Dhwani 🙂
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Thanks a lot Radhika 🙂 🙂
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#It is a mixture of natural love…
&I loved it…
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Glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
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